God’s warm breath caresses my naked neck
Below a hundred streams softly sing
Standing here upon this heavenly place
Makes me feel as mighty as a king.
The wild flowers sway and dance tenderly
Through endless fields of emerald green
They are truly a vision to behold
Though not as beautiful as my queen.
small refreshing..beautiful..and deep..I ask nothing more from a poem..its very well penned! ..
Beauyifully rounded poem I like comparisions with nature.10
A refreshing poem full of the joy of life and love-the greatest gifts from God to man. 10.
Hi John - a lovely poem with good form - two balanced quatrains and a consistent rhyme pattern x a x a in bothe verses. It needs a little work on the FLOW (METRE) but i will discuss this with you. The two verses balance each other. In verse one - Nature complements his Sovereignity. In verse two the beauty of nature complements the beauty of his QUEEN. Because of the delicacy of the words and their structure I will award it a MAX for elegance, Yours in poetry - JOHN
Your queen could wish for nothing more of your accolade shining in your poem which is excellent...++++10 regards
Beautiful..I am so glad I read your poems, they are amazing! ! Oozing imagination and imagery!
I love it! ! Its so rich in imagery! !
This is a style I always feel comfortable with; where the voice of the poem seems to take on an additional personality, somewhere out of time; and the self is super present and super conscious of everything, and kind of balances above it all like a benediction. Really enjoyed this.
beautiful poem for a beautiful queen from a beautiful poet luwi
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
I cant see vote option - 10+!