...The Haunting.... Poem by wardha jawdat

...The Haunting....

Rating: 2.9


i lie here alone
upon the dark abandoned piece
of beach that we once claimed
in love...

i lie here alone
with tears that wont stop or slow
and i wonder
could my tears
drown this ocean

i lie here alone
and the elements respect my pain
the waves mere ripples
lapping gently at my feet;
like old friends consoling, cajoling;
the winds, petting hands
silencing the stirrings of neptune

i lie here alone
yet i lie here with you
even as the vagrant gulls
late to return and roost
trace deep lonely shadows
upon the horizon..i cant return home
for its brimful with memories
walking its hallways
reposing in its rooms
reclining on its seaters
and awaiting me
to haunt
some more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ata khan 05 April 2009

Flows like a beautiful quiet stream and still says it all The ability to say so much in such few lines is nothing but..... brilliance 10+

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Kesav Easwaran 21 November 2008

emotions spilling out...spilling out, over a silently witnessing otherwise soothing sandy bed carrying the loving memories of life that once was...well done, Wardha...10

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Fiona Davidson 19 November 2008

Descriptive piece...really makes me feel like I'm there on that lonely beach with you...thanks for this one....

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 19 November 2008

amazing way of expression...pain weaved into words...wonderfully...

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