The Heart's Song Poem by Daniel Brick

The Heart's Song

Rating: 5.0


What can you add to the Heart's Song?
How do you warm the sun's rays on a cold day?
How do you speed up the wind or the river's current?
Friends, this is nonsense: Just add your voice and sing!

You should know by now there are no words, and thoughts
fail when a simple beauty is perceived. But if you echo
that beauty by singing it with absolute commitment,
the world will skip a beat, and all - all will be changed!

Monday, April 24, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry,visionary
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dear friends at PoemHunter, I found a draft of this 8-line poem in one of my notebooks. I don't remember writing it, but it expresses my values perfectly. So did I write it and forget to sign my name, or did I copy it from someone and forget to sign their name. Please let me know if yu recognize it as your work and I will immediately erase it!
Note to Rebecca: Do you see the exclamation marks at lines 4 and 8? That's your influence in me! !
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 03 May 2017

So inspirational. Don't try to attempt the impossible. Just add your voice and sing. What a great message you give. I believe that writers are fortunate in this regard that they immortalize the beauty n the world remembers their words. Their songs cheer sad souls and for a while the world forgets its sores. A remarkable poem. A super 10.

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Rebecca Navarre 30 April 2017

Forgive Me But OMG! ! ! ! ! The Beauty And Depths In This Melody Ever Does So Echo And Speak! ! ! ! ! A Very, Very Moving Poem! ! ! ! ! Thank You So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Many 10S! ! ! ! ! +++++! And Goodness! ! ! ! ! Thank You! ! ! ! ! You've Brought A Smile! ! ! ! ! Many In Return! ! ! ! !

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Daniel Brick 01 May 2017

Sometimes something very pure and wholesome flowers into words and we have a small but resonant poem. They go by almost too quickly to be heard, but once heard stay with us.Your enthusiasm peaks my delight.

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Cigeng Zhang 27 April 2017

The heart's song can be a soulful song. And to a poet, it is his poetry, the inner voice sung out by his true heart and soul. A beautiful poem. Enjoyed it.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 April 2017

Hello Daniel, The heart's song is a warm and lovable song. Yes! One has to see the love and beauty around us. Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder! May love be all embracing! Beautifully penned! 10++

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Daniel Brick 24 April 2017

Thank you for your appreciation of THE HEART'S SONG. It is a small poem that serves a Big Cause which you express wonderfully in linking Beauty and Love. I share your gratitude to POEMHUNTER for providing us poets with a common ground for our sharing of poems.

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