The Heat Goes On Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

The Heat Goes On

Rating: 5.0


The Heat Goes On

it's light outside
not from the moon
not yet a half or full moon to be seen,

the veil that covers the sky
got thicker
no longer transparent

the weather lady says: it's going to storm,
three days kong she crackles,
not a drop of rain,

but still, those overheated roads,
on which the skies dance in their own reflection,
and then the weather news of the next hour

Torrential rain falls
and thunderstorms
when will she stop with that chatter out of her thumb? !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The heatwave is upon the Netherlands,38,5 Celcius degrees. Just few days it is going lower. to 30 Celcius Degrees
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2022

Dear Poet CN Premkumar, thank you so much for your attentive and great support. We have both in common our love for the painting section

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C N Premkumar 28 August 2022

Those overheated roads, on which the skies dance in their own reflection. Beautiful imagination..

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Sylvia Frances Chan 28 August 2022

I said to myself, there is a small error in this poem, The word 'kong' must become 'long'. In the third stnza, please. Thank you for your attention.

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C N Premkumar 28 August 2022

You can edit any of your poems.

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