S.N. Surajbhan

Rookie - 125 Points (4th November,2000 / Bhubaneswar)

The Immortal Lives - Poem by S.N. Surajbhan

Oh! The Immortal lives
Very evident your journey
Like from a seed into a tree,
You ring the bell of justice and
Infringe the chain of slaves.
Many battles, many ruins and many bloodshed
You acquired our nation with your
Indomitable perseverance,
As if you smashed off all demons to prevail sanctity…………! !

Oh! The immortal lives
You have injected the spirit of nationality in us
The setting sun, the sun rays at grass field
All grounded with your sublime touch
And subtle thought,
You reigned in tranquility, shaped the nation
In your lenient fingers……….! !

Oh! The immortal lives
You are remembered and revered always
In our heart; for everything
You have left for us,
Now, you pave the path;
Where peace leads the victory
And violence can never ………….! !

Topic(s) of this poem: live

Form: ABC


Comments about The Immortal Lives by S.N. Surajbhan

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/16/2015 5:39:00 AM)


    Many battles, many ruins and many bloodshed
    You acquired our nation with your
    Indomitable perseverance,
    As if you smashed off all demons to prevail sanctity…………! !
    A great praise for all those who achieved great things for us. thank you. you have a very great future as a poet and a writer. Go on writing. thank you. tony
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  • Chinedu Dike (11/22/2015 5:51:00 PM)


    A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Surajbhan. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (11/15/2015 5:02:00 AM)


    Interesting poem that again shows how cliches don't ever become old.. A nice one S. N. Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/14/2015 10:36:00 AM)


    Nicely written, S.N. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • S.n. Surajbhan (11/14/2015 9:34:00 AM)


    Hi. Good start up#keep it up#enjoy (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 14, 2015



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