The Immortal Lives Poem by S.N. Surajbhan

The Immortal Lives

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Oh! The Immortal lives
Very evident your journey
Like from a seed into a tree,
You ring the bell of justice and
Infringe the chain of slaves.
Many battles, many ruins and many bloodshed
You acquired our nation with your
Indomitable perseverance,
As if you smashed off all demons to prevail sanctity…………! !

Oh! The immortal lives
You have injected the spirit of nationality in us
The setting sun, the sun rays at grass field
All grounded with your sublime touch
And subtle thought,
You reigned in tranquility, shaped the nation
In your lenient fingers……….! !

Oh! The immortal lives
You are remembered and revered always
In our heart; for everything
You have left for us,
Now, you pave the path;
Where peace leads the victory
And violence can never ………….! !

Saturday, November 14, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: live
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.n. Surajbhan 14 November 2015

Hi. Good start up#keep it up#enjoy

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Jazib Kamalvi 31 May 2019

Write comment. Nice start, S. N. Read my poem, Love and. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 December 2015

Many battles, many ruins and many bloodshed You acquired our nation with your Indomitable perseverance, As if you smashed off all demons to prevail sanctity…………! ! A great praise for all those who achieved great things for us. thank you. you have a very great future as a poet and a writer. Go on writing. thank you. tony

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Chinedu Dike 22 November 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Surajbhan. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Souren Mondal 15 November 2015

Interesting poem that again shows how cliches don't ever become old.. A nice one S. N. Thank you for sharing..

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Kelly Kurt 14 November 2015

Nicely written, S.N. Thanks for sharing

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