The Joy You Have To Share Poem by Ishita Mehta

the entire piece is fabulous, it touched my heart very much, especially the the four lines of the first stanza, vey tender poem.

That is something which you'll carry down to your children as well....after the excellent 'training' from your mother... Very well expressed feelings..! Cheers. Subroto

Nice friendly poem in nature and feelings.

love between mother and daughter is special good poem reflects that

and still more to share you with, ., , its a joyful life that lovers can create through their love to make a creat one to last forever.. so beautiful my dear sweer girl.. hazem al..

very nice and pure expressions 10..

a sweet poem.. emotional enough and iteresting one..love the idea and expressions...10+++++++++

beautiful dedication to mom.............

I would like to make a prediction right here and now....If you continue writing poems of this calibre and you are only 16 now...you are destined to be a great poet in the future. Ishita you have got what it takes don't ever lose it... Regards Alf...tell me when you have written again please.

you have some very distiguished comments here... the phenomena of motherhood defies a definition in the conventional sense you did a very good poem i too wrote a poem on mothers day great cheers