The Lacerated Diary
Rating: ★2.8
Bookends almost adjoining, now
For all that's not of florid inditement,
Are words unwritten sulphurously
Follow my path of pages, you'll see
In this winter smitten land, forsaken,
My crimson ink infused in snow
For all that's not of florid inditement,
Are words unwritten sulphurously
Follow my path of pages, you'll see
In this winter smitten land, forsaken,
My crimson ink infused in snow
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Abby Whaley
17 March 2012
Lovely poem Matthew!
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Annabel Cruz
12 March 2012
Love the line winter smitten land and your use of alliteration path of pages! Nicely done! However, I'm an English teacher so I have some advice about your word usage (poetic license aside) : there is no adverb form of sulphorous, the collocation for imbued is with, not on and there is no such word as inditement, did you mean indictment? This is constructive criticism so I hope it does not offend you...it is well meaning.
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Unwritten Soul
12 March 2012
I have nothing to say other that an awesome writing, it was a good one Matthew...it speaks for you
If a diary can express your days and it really left reader with heartfelt read :) but a bit scary too hahahaha_Unwritten Soul
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Wahab Abdul
11 March 2012
wow! a great poem! i like it, well crafted and well composed...a great write.....i like it. please read my new poems.
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