The Last Moon Poem by nimal dunuhinga

The Last Moon

Rating: 5.0


Who worries of this pauper's whereabouts
And please do not think that I don't have any regrets?
I sleep on the road as usual and I see you all the time in the night sky.
But I know about the vast distance between us.
Faraway stars in multitude but none of them solve my destiny.
Sun never bothers in the morning if I am not awake
And I feel that I see the last Moon tonight.

* If someone sings this I would like to hear that voice before I close my eyes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 17 November 2009

This is a sweet, melancholy tribute to life and the mystery of the night sky. Your words come straight from the heart. Your message is poignant and timeless. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 10 November 2009

It would be impossible to read this beautiful elegy and remain unmoved. It is so very touching. Beyond tens, my friend. Affectionate regards, Sandra

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Romeo Della Valle 08 November 2009

Great work, Nimal, it shows a great talent you got, well penned, you got my vote 10+. hoping you have the time to read my newly posted poem titled 'A QUEEN WAS BORN' and enjoy it, warm regards...

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Rajaram Ramachandran 08 November 2009

The Sun or Moon cares not for anyone in doing its own duty in a routine manner. This truth comes out of this poem very nicely.

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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