The Love Spectrum Poem by sarwar chowdhury

The Love Spectrum

Rating: 5.0


The spectrum I had seen
It was her love, I mean

The world is
running thirty kilometer
per second-
my love is running
faster than world speed
towards her, only towards her..
This is my practice of love to eternity


and there is no end.. no end..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 03 December 2008

Some good metaphor here, , lovely a 10

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Tsira Goge 17 November 2008

sarwar, Beautiful poems.... I Think that that spectrum of love mysterious colours, as itself a great mystery of eternity... 10.... / Thank you for the comment../ Best wishes, Tsira

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Reshma Ramesh 14 October 2008

no end no end..........keep writing...nice

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Mamta Agarwal 19 September 2008

i like the intensity of feeling anmd expression in this poem, so much said in a few lines10+

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Koyel Mitra 05 September 2008

Nice poem.Liked it! A full 10+

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 06 October 2009

‘This is my practice of love to eternity…’ …and there is no end.. no end Jewel and nugget finish. Truly a record in love sprint. Gold Ten+ Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to my page and thanks for comment. niv .

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Rachel Butler 22 September 2009

The spectrum I had seen It was her love, I mean Rachel Ann Butler

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 August 2009

love has to beever lastingandeternal.. no doubt abt it and this is good and educative poem....10

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'This is my practice of love to eternity' A photo finish. Between eternal and temporal. Ten++

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Crystle Jones 22 July 2009

ok this is my number one fav. the last verse was remarkable. all of it was, but that part was what sold me the most. i hope if i keep working on my work, i can one day be as great and inspiring as you are my friend. i am completely envious!

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sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.
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