The spectrum I had seen
It was her love, I mean
The world is
running thirty kilometer
per second-
my love is running
faster than world speed
towards her, only towards her..
This is my practice of love to eternity
and there is no end.. no end..
sarwar, Beautiful poems.... I Think that that spectrum of love mysterious colours, as itself a great mystery of eternity... 10.... / Thank you for the comment../ Best wishes, Tsira
i like the intensity of feeling anmd expression in this poem, so much said in a few lines10+
‘This is my practice of love to eternity…’ …and there is no end.. no end Jewel and nugget finish. Truly a record in love sprint. Gold Ten+ Ms. Nivedita Cordially invite to my page and thanks for comment. niv .
The spectrum I had seen It was her love, I mean Rachel Ann Butler
love has to beever lastingandeternal.. no doubt abt it and this is good and educative poem....10
'This is my practice of love to eternity' A photo finish. Between eternal and temporal. Ten++
ok this is my number one fav. the last verse was remarkable. all of it was, but that part was what sold me the most. i hope if i keep working on my work, i can one day be as great and inspiring as you are my friend. i am completely envious!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Some good metaphor here, , lovely a 10