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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .

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TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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Sunday, April 26, 2009

The Message......The Life Is But A Bassage

Rating: 4.4
It was a message

touchingly saying
the life is but a passage.

In her eyes was a sorrow,

asking for only one? ? continued search for any clue,

a crying soul begging to know and heart to rule

On the edge of
that mountain where he sat..watching the sun,

watching the rise till the set, , recalling past,

living the now, loving then, trying to keep little of it..,

the same she does..with no regret......

On that mountain where is the days are very few,

trying to grasp little of life and love true while

the days continue to flit,

.but who is she? ! she is apiece of the large universe having

so much of his grit.,

trying to be in his place, watching with him how the sun plays,

and it's beauty stealing the days..,

to her he said bask with me in the life, in the sun,

as not every day we will stay and being touched by sunny ray,

In that place seeing him watching the sky and it's blue..

if this is the case and what is said is very true then hand in hand,

and face to face the fate they draw,

if this is the case then every day the love grow

as what you plant you always get.so why to rue....

It was her tool, it was a feeling
a touching call from his soul... bask with me, let us glow..and there
she sat..watching the sun
and more of you..becoming more and very sure that the seed is very
true..and her worries were never due,

it was a message

it was a feeling continued singing only you
TaMaRa HaNaRiNg ,(((( PaLeSTiNe))))FreedOm Flottila .
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COMMENTS
Queen Dream 21 November 2009
Very sensitive peom that fits for the decade of Romeo and Juliet.10/10
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Catrina Heart 27 July 2009
It was her tool, it was a feeling a touching call from his soul... bask with me, let us glow..and there she sat..watching the sun and more of you..becoming more and very sure that the seed is very true..and her worries were never due, it was a message it was a feeling continued singing only you well written poem in eloquence and heartfelt one indeed! ! ! 10+++
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Sandra Fowler 15 June 2009
Eloquently written. But the mood is poignant and filled with last things as well. Beautiful penning. Warm regards, Sandra
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that was touching tale indeed...your words can touch the core of the reader's heart...nice one ma'am 10++
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Afzal Shauq 28 May 2009
a heart touching and brain knocking poem written with a rich logic... liked it and appreciate your ideas... innovative approach..well done tamara dear...10+++++
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rago rago 10 May 2009
an heart rendering poem.......... just the last stanza a beautiful piece of write....giving the message.........plz see my 10 ++++
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Dr.subhendu Kar 06 May 2009
yet the nostalgic thought inflicts upon the stillness the very innerness goes smoldering, seizing the soul in dark room, shadow rocks up to the muse, yet eyes looks on the last pegs of the dream, quite passionate write by the imagery, .well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing
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Mara Lemara 28 April 2009
beautiful imagery Tamara, how the sun plays and stealing our days..wonderful writting,10+++ watching with him how the sun plays, and it's beauty stealing the days.., to her he said bask with me in the life,
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Barry A. Lanier 27 April 2009
a most romantic scene of the couple on the mountain of love....possibly on different sides having identical dreams and passions, , , , ever drawing closer...and closer...leaving the reader wondering
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~ Jon London ~ 27 April 2009
Tamara, This's a very touching and beautiful piece, your soft toned lines give this a stunning feel to it. Its lovely 10++++
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