The Monday Morning Alarm Call Comments

Great poem Andrew, very well composed, very good rhyming too. I really enjoyed reading this one. A little different from your usual poetry. Nice one. Always good to have a change and try something new. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

I can hear the clock tick-tocking its way through this very clever poem Andrew. Your language has an almost automaton delivery and the whole piece charges along like a racehorse at speed. The message underpinning your light-hearted words is not unnoticed either. Great poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

well penned indeed...//u r words speaks a lot thanks

Great write Andy, you have captured the monotony of everyday living in the flow of this write. Well penned, 10 Lynda xx

I enjoyed this so very much because, it is such a natural feel we each have every morning. At least I do.. It captures the feeling of OH HUM that you have painted so very well.... Enjoyed this also as it is a feeling we all can relate to.... Very nicely written in true classic form inwhich we all have grown to love... Bonnie

Too true..nice humor..keep writing

Like or not, do or don't time waits for none! If we don't beat time by our briskness our woes will continue forever. Tick tock will not stop because it is an invincible spirit! Nice poem to read as it provokes many ideas on Time!