Sneha R

Freshman - 560 Points (6th September 2017)

The Moon - Poem by Sneha R

The moon

I saw the moon at a distance
Why not say 10000 miles for instance
I watched as it moved slowly with grace
It didn't seem to stay in one place

Thundering typhoons! I saw a mass flying by
A mass as dark as the night sky
A demon shaped cloud, I thought the moon would fight
But no, it didn't, it continued it's slow flight

And out of the fiend she came
And sought not to have fame
But sought to have peace
Because, afterall, peace is free and nice
Isn't it?

~Yours truly

Topic(s) of this poem: childishness, moon, peace

Form: Ballad


Poet's Notes about The Poem

We can learn a lot from nature. Peace has become really rare in today's times. I had written this poem when I was in 5th grade. The childish observation I made betrayed the fact that nature can inculcate so many values in people

Comments about The Moon by Sneha R

  • (12/2/2017 10:03:00 PM)


    I really liked this poem. (Report) Reply

    Sneha R (12/3/2017 9:41:00 AM)

    Thank you for the lovely comment

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  • Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (12/2/2017 9:57:00 PM)


    Hi Sneha,
    Lovely poem. Loved the last line:
    Because, afterall, peace is free and nice
    Isn't it?
    Congratulations
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    Sneha R (12/3/2017 9:42:00 AM)

    Absolutely lovely, ma'am. Thanks a ton

  • (12/2/2017 7:30:00 PM)


    Exceptionally well written from a youngster. (Report) Reply

    Sneha R (12/3/2017 9:47:00 AM)

    Thank you ma'am

  • (12/2/2017 6:05:00 PM)


    Wonderful poem so nicely penned Congratulations (Report) Reply

    Sneha R (12/3/2017 9:46:00 AM)

    Means a lot sir. Thank you

  • Bipasha D (12/2/2017 1:46:00 PM)


    Sadly, peace is elusive in today's world even if it is free. Excellent poem. (Report) Reply

    Sneha R (12/3/2017 9:49:00 AM)

    True sir. Thank you

  • Sonali Parida (12/2/2017 11:08:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem shared.
    Congrats Sneha for the POD.
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  • (12/2/2017 10:56:00 AM)


    This is definitely scripted wonderfully and stunningly with so much passion and beauty obligated makes it
    the best one today...........full credit........thanks for sharing
    (Report) Reply

    Sneha R (12/3/2017 9:49:00 AM)

    It means a lot. Thank you sir

  • Anil Kumar Panda (12/2/2017 9:16:00 AM)


    The poem says what an awesome talent you have. Simple, beautiful and with a nice flow, this is a very nice poem. Congrats. (Report) Reply

  • Theresa Dunn (12/2/2017 6:18:00 AM)


    Well written I enjoyed reading your work (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (12/2/2017 6:15:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem on moon, the embodiment of peace, has been nicely depicted.Thank u dear Sneha and congratulate for being selected this poem as the poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Sneha R (12/2/2017 5:06:00 AM)


    I will have to multiply the word thank you a million times to thank you all enough (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (12/2/2017 4:58:00 AM)


    A philosophy of life derived from the changing moods of nature.
    This is marvelous. Thanks for sharing the poem, Sneha.
    (Report) Reply

    Sneha R (12/2/2017 5:00:00 AM)

    Thanks a million sir

  • Tom Allport (12/2/2017 4:26:00 AM)


    a lovely poem of a peaceful moon that is silvery bright showing you the way on a very dark night? ............well written Sneha (Report) Reply

    Sneha R (12/2/2017 5:14:00 AM)

    I am honoured, sir

  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (12/2/2017 3:00:00 AM)


    An extra ordinary perfection in creating a marvelous moon poem, dear Sneha, you have a long way to go in this world of poetry.Congrats for the selection as POD.
    10
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    Sneha R (12/2/2017 5:15:00 AM)

    You always seem to be there for me sir, my mentor

  • Edward Kofi Louis (12/2/2017 2:12:00 AM)


    At a distance! ! Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

    Sneha R (12/2/2017 3:24:00 AM)

    Thank you so much sir

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (12/2/2017 1:32:00 AM)


    Sneha, such a heartwarming poem.. congrats for being picked... a huge 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Muzahidul Reza (12/2/2017 12:35:00 AM)


    Thundering typhoons! I saw a mass flying by
    A mass as dark as the night sky, ............. fantastic written, congratuation and thanks for sharing the poem with us,10. You may comment on my poem, Ode To The Moon, thanks
    (Report) Reply

    Sneha R (12/2/2017 5:01:00 AM)

    Sure sir thank you

  • Geoffrey Fafard (12/2/2017 12:26:00 AM)


    Out of the mouths and pens of babes beauty is born. You must keep this poem for ever and ever Sneha. If nothing else just to look back at and smile. Wonderful write. Cheers and best wishes in your poetry career. Geoffrey. (Report) Reply

  • (12/2/2017 12:22:00 AM)


    In 5th grade! And here it is as Poem Of The Day! You should be very proud! Congratulations, Sneha! (Report) Reply

    Sneha R (12/2/2017 3:23:00 AM)

    Thank you so very much

  • Robert Murray Smith (12/2/2017 12:07:00 AM)


    To write a poem so young and so well is exceptional.10

    Robert
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    Sneha R (12/2/2017 3:23:00 AM)

    Thanks a ton sir

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 5, 2017



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