Moon Poems: 146 / 500

The Moon

Rating: 4.6

The moon

I saw the moon at a distance
Why not say 10000 miles for instance
I watched as it moved slowly with grace
It didn't seem to stay in one place

Thundering typhoons! I saw a mass flying by
A mass as dark as the night sky
A demon shaped cloud, I thought the moon would fight
But no, it didn't, it continued it's slow flight

And out of the fiend she came
And sought not to have fame
But sought to have peace
Because, afterall, peace is free and nice
Isn't it?

~Yours truly

Sunday, November 5, 2017
Moon Poems: 146 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: childishness,moon,peace
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We can learn a lot from nature. Peace has become really rare in today's times. I had written this poem when I was in 5th grade. The childish observation I made betrayed the fact that nature can inculcate so many values in people
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 02 December 2017

An extra ordinary perfection in creating a marvelous moon poem, dear Sneha, you have a long way to go in this world of poetry.Congrats for the selection as POD. 10

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Binayakumar Mohanty 22 January 2018

Sought not to have fame But sought to have peace Because, after all peace is free and nice A poem worth reading.Images properly placed A big 10+++ Thanks for sharing. I invite you to my page You may enjoy some of my poems dear poet. Regards Binaya

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Wilma Purcell 02 December 2017

I really liked this poem.

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Sneha R 03 December 2017

Thank you for the lovely comment

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 02 December 2017

Hi Sneha, Lovely poem. Loved the last line: Because, afterall, peace is free and nice Isn't it? Congratulations

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Sneha R 03 December 2017

Absolutely lovely, ma'am. Thanks a ton

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Sophie Chalmers 02 December 2017

Exceptionally well written from a youngster.

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Sneha R 03 December 2017

Thank you ma'am

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 December 2017

Wonderful poem so nicely penned Congratulations

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Sneha R 03 December 2017

Means a lot sir. Thank you

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