The Moon Boat Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Moon Boat

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Live to love like amorous mermaids,
Enjoy the tides in a full moon night,
It's your ocean; it's your passion,
You are yourself a Venus so bright.

So let the Venus be jealous of you,
I assure Venus will never make harms,
See the image of moon as a rescue boat,
Catch it if you can and open your arms.

So what if you're exposed a little,
And stars are starring at the hides,
So what if surf is kissing your all,
Be a little ecstatic in the lovely tides.

Don't destroy this life and this world
We'll love more when go to the heaven,
This world is a truth and before our eyes,
It's one only one and not six or seven.

May be, tomorrow on way to the office,
A suicide bomber takes off for the heaven,
Whether we'll survive or flush and blood,
On the road in pieces may be six or seven!

I assure this lovely vibrating moon boat,
Is safe and secured it's guarded by love,
Forget your religion, your color and race,
Board as a mermaid and fly like a dove!

Terror cannot cut this image of the moon
Dancing on the waves it will safely float,
It's a cradle; it's a swing, and a rose's bed,
It can fly as well; it's a silky moon boat!

The Moon Boat
Wednesday, March 30, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lifestyle
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalid Saifullah 10 October 2018

Terror cannot cut this image of the moon Dancing on the waves it will safely float, It's a cradle; it's a swing, and a rose's bed, It can fly as well; it's a silky moon boat! ...............great thoughts.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 January 2018

This is a fascinating poem. I would love to quote the first stanza here: Live to love like amorous mermaids, Enjoy the tides in a full moon night/It's your ocean; it's your passion/You are yourself a Venus so bright.....thanks dear sir for sharing this elegant poem!

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 May 2016

Don't destory this life and this world! Respect the universe and, respect all mankind. Nice piece of work.

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Hazel Durham 12 April 2016

Wow! Sizzling with love for this world to unite us all into a family of different traditions religions and cultures to feel the joy of living, giving and forgiving. The beautiful moon boat is there for us to get on board sailing into a harmonious world where love is our daily food, to right the wrongs to change hate into a sanctuary of love and peace! Outstanding write!

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