The Notes Of Autumn Poem by Cigeng Zhang

The Notes Of Autumn

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The gentle rain, like a violin
Clear autumn is the string
September’s fragrance
Permeate into the trunks
Discolored leaves are falling
onto earthy bed of refreshing

5Sept2015

The Notes Of Autumn
Saturday, September 5, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 05 September 2015

Another autumn comes around with russet and golden leaves and, yes..... the rain. Good poem.

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Perdita Young 16 March 2018

Such a beautiful word picture of autumn... love it very mcuh.

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Edward Kofi Louis 28 July 2016

Nature! ! With the muse of the gentle rain. Nice work.

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Daniel Brick 03 October 2015

Three images in six lines, four senses evoked: sight, sound, scent, touch, title image - these are the components of your poem, in the tradition of hundreds, no, thousands of Chinese poets before you, and they would all recognize the poetry you're writing. I'm going to write a similar poem today in the Twin Cities because it's same kind of day here.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2015

Thrilling expression on autumn. A marvellous poem that touches the heart and mind. Many thanks dear Cigeng, keep the ball rolling......10

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Kwai Chee Low 05 September 2015

Another beautiful piece, and I sense the zen. I am especially mesmerised with your metaphor Clear autumn is the spring. Thanks for sharing Cigeng.

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