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The Obsessive Agony Of Lust

Rating: 4.8

Self lost in obsessive agony,
Your primal curiosity - a burning ferocity,
The raging fire consumes your dignity,
And shame put to slumber.

Seduced by the wayward twin of Love,
Powers of deviation subdued,
On pathway of despair you tread:
A burden too heavy to bear.

Mind drowning in bitter-sweetened sensation,
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Sunday, August 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: lust
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 10 June 2020

Metaphor, simile and deep meanings written in high poetic language, makes thinkers and intellectuals review their behaviours and personalities very often, in the light of this poem might they will criticize themselves as well. You write few poems but the quality is excellent. congratulations. it goes into my fav list 10++

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Chinedu Dike 11 June 2020

Hi Soran, thanks a million times for your insightful appraisal of the poemp Remain enriched.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 July 2018

It is a brilliant poem on having touching expression and nice collocation. The penmanship is touching and nice. It is a lesson to the human society. I quote....... Raving lunatic you've become, Seeking savage-desire's fulfillment: An ugly reflection of nature devoid of contentment. - a nightmare in Infatuation's phoney bed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Chinedu Dike 09 July 2018

Thanks my friend for your beautiful and insightful appraisal of the poem. Remain enriched.

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Chinedu's Poet's Pen always emits power in all his creations that I have read. Yes, turns a person into raving lunatic devoid of contentment. This wonderful poem unfolds the animalistic side of a human being conveyed vividly with compelling imagery. Another powerful and perceptive write brilliantly penned.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2021

your dignity... great expression! A pragmatic write!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2021

The raging fire consumes

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Cont...powerful line from a well crafted and conveyed poem.

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'The raging fire consumes your dignity, and shame put to slumber'. Powerful

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Suresh Kumar Ek 27 November 2020

A nightmare In infatuation Artistically penned

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