Thursday, May 22, 2008

The One That I Love Comments

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I bid her farewell as she waves from the doorstep,
My heart feels so heavy I so want to stay,
But there I must leave her till late in the evening,
When I shall return at the end of the day.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ernestine Northover 29 May 2008

I was flying along with you Andrew reading this one. Lovely flowing poem and the contents are so lovingly written. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 24 May 2008

I hope that she sees you at least as clearly as we do from here Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 22 May 2008

Ahh she'll be waiting for your return, with open arms i'm sure! Great poem, of love! ! Best wishes Andrew! ! *10*! ! ! Friend Thad

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Gillian.E. Shaw 22 May 2008

I really like this one. Brings warmth to the heart. It is old fashioned and sentimental and I really appreciate this sort of writing. Lovely.

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