The Patient Poem by Indira Renganathan

The Patient

Rating: 5.0


She is like the moon
Always bright and smiling
Wherever she is she plashes
Silvery flashes all around

Never shows her dark side
Always bright and smiling
So contemptuously peep
If you into her far side..

Only you 'll feel tainted dark
Then you more wonder at her sort
She still remains bright
So composed, so controlled

She's the moon fully silvery
Always bright and smiling

Wednesday, March 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 March 2018

What a joyful piece to read, like the most welcoming smile of a good person..Yes, in happiness and sadness there is always that happy disposition in us. A write full of positivity. Beautifully crafted. Very inspiring, Indira. Thank you for sharing. 10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 March 2018

Silvery flashes all around we feel and we find calm bright light like moon from her. Gentle greetings of life motivates many. Bright smiling brings real joy. This poem is beautifully and excellently penned here...10

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Valsa George 24 March 2018

Some people are like that! They always greet life with a smile equally in joy and pain! Even when life snarls at them as an ugly monster, they are never dispirited and continue to show a happy countenance! This positive attitude helps them brave the storms of life! An inspirational write!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 March 2018

She is like the moon that never shows her dark side! Beautiful contemplation! The dark aspect of a smiling person is unknown to every body that she always hides but enlightens the world only through joyful disposition! A beautiful poem dear madam! Thanks for sharing! Pray God shower on you drops of peace and happiness......(Dillip)

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