Isabella Francis

The Perfect Night

The breeze blows,
Soft and soothing as a caress.
The breeze blows,
Taking with it all the stress.

The moon glows,
Her brown curls glow silver.
The moon glows,
A smile flows on her lips like a river.

The leaves fall,
She listens to their soft rustle.
The leaves fall,
As she builds her dream castle.

The clouds cover the moon,
Wrapping her in deathly silence.
The clouds cover the moon,
She relaxes her body tense.

A hug comes and shields her,
Giving her all the warmth she needs.
A hug comes and shields her,
In the arms of her beloved she peacefully sleeps.

Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 12, 2011

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  • Kee Thampi (12/20/2011 9:32:00 AM)

    hug comes and shields her,
    Giving her all the warmth she needs.
    A hug comes and shields her,
    In the arms of her beloved she peacefully sleeps.

    very good to forsaken shields

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  • isabella Francis (11/13/2011 11:30:00 AM)

    Thank you so much.. I'm so encouraged to write more.. Thank you..

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  • Romeo Della ValleRomeo Della Valle (11/12/2011 6:07:00 PM)

    Beautiful and very smooth, it gives me sensation of peace! Rich in imagery and fine texture, definitely, a 10+++ Your poetic talent Isabella is so obvious through this amazing poem! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City..

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  • Abhishek TiwariAbhishek Tiwari (11/12/2011 12:19:00 PM)

    Definetly a hug can be compared with all the austonishing natures 'plays'..
    It is magical..
    Thats y v cl it zadu ki jhappi!
    Again a great output of you heartly feelings!

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  • Sam Varghis (11/12/2011 10:35:00 AM)

    Beautiful. I voted 9'. Regards Sam

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  • Tempest Juliet (11/12/2011 9:29:00 AM)

    Amazingly imagery, actually left me breathless. Completely gorgeous.

    t.

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  • Ebi RobertEbi Robert (11/12/2011 9:03:00 AM)

    Believe me, this flows................................

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