The Poet And The Pearly Gates Poem by Brian Mayo

The Poet And The Pearly Gates

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I stood before the Pearly Gates.
I hung my head in shame.
St. Peter peered into his book-
But did not see my name.

I asked him please to look again…
I hoped for a mistake.
I shuddered with the vision
of a painful, fiery lake.

He gently shook his head and smiled.
"I'm truly sad, " he said,
"But you are not allowed inside
And no tear can I shed.'

'Your name does not appear within
So this is where we part.
Eternity without you, friend-
Without your decent heart."

I tried to hold back bitter tears
But as I turned to go,
I asked St. Peter something, and
I hoped he wouldn't say no.

"Oh please, St. Pete, I beg of you,
You won't see me again…
Before I face my lonely fate-
Some paper and a pen? "

He said, "Ah yes, a poet!
We've very few of you…
I'll give you what you ask for,
Just to see what you will do."

I only had a minute left.
I wasted no more time.
I grabbed the tools held out to me.
And penned a simple rhyme.

- - Dear Jesus, I'm so sorry,
I can't be your new friend.
But please, look after my dear mom…
On her, you can depend.

I know she's in there somewhere, Lord
Among your golden skies.
She'll be the one with quiet grace
And kindness in her eyes.

I know you owe me not a thing.
I have no cards, you see.
But please, dear Jesus, all I ask…
Don't tell her where I'll be! - -

.................Part II..................

St. Peter took the poem from me-
It vanished from his hand!
I felt a warm and gentle breeze…
My feet seemed stuck in sand.

He looked at me in mild surprise…
A grin grew his face.
And suddenly a divine glow
Lit up the holy space.

A perfect sphere of blinding light
Appeared beside St. Pete
And from it stepped the very man
I wanted most to meet.

I kid you not, he stood right there.
His hair was shining gold!
There was no judgment in his smile-
No trace of scorn or scold.

His flowing robes were blinding white.
His aura brightly shone.
He turned his gentle face to me,
He said, "I got your poem."

I tried to look him in the eyes.
His face, it held no pain.
Then Jesus held out his good hands.
He said, "You're no Mark Twain...'

'But what you wrote did not displease…
In fact, I think it's swell.
The thing that most impressed me was
You thought not of yourself.'

'Your little poem has touched my heart
I know your mother well…
And yes, of course I'd spare her from
The knowledge of your Hell.'

'But, Brian, you've redeemed yourself!
Your simple poem was pure.
It truly showed your caring soul
Of this, I am quite sure.'

'I wish for you to come inside
And make yourself at home.
Tomorrow, all of Heaven will
Be hearing of your poem."

Sunday, October 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: poets,religious
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The last-minute salvation of a poet with a good heart.
I wrote this a few years ago and occasionally make small improvements.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lily O Donnell 04 March 2018

This is so beautiful and touching. Thank You so much.

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Brian Mayo 03 December 2018

Thank you for the very nice comment.

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Neran Sati 23 October 2015

It's brilliant and I hear the message here: be what you are, devote yourself to your work to benefit others and, don't fear the future? .. even paradise: -) . So enlightening, thanks so much!

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Pamela Sinicrope 22 October 2015

Redemption through poetry. You are a talented rhyming poet. I truly enjoyed reading this too! Thanks for sharing your stories and your humor!

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Paul Brookes 21 October 2015

I loved this gentle and well told tale great work Thanks for sharing 10/10

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Melvina Germain 19 October 2015

Oh my gosh, I love this poem with all my heart, it took me high upon a mountain and I sat there and watched it all unfold. You are amazing and penned a perfect story poem...Thank you.....

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Brian Mayo

Grand Rapids Michigan
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