The Possum Poem by Brian Mayo

The Possum

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My father was a poet and my mother was depressed
The bed that she got pregnant on was quickly repossessed
Now homeless, she gave birth to me on cold November ground
And there she left me lay because I only weighed a pound

I struggled to the gutter seeking warmth, but finding none
I wondered if my life was ending ‘fore it had begun
I knew I needed shelter; knew my time was growing short
And so I started screaming as a loud and last resort

A shadow fell; a nearby possum must’ve heard my cries
I only had a moment to react and improvise
I crawled under its belly, where I found her barren pouch
And once I was inside, it was as comfy as a couch

She raised me as her own; she really went the extra-mile
I drank that possum-milk like it was going out of style
It wasn’t long before I was out foraging for food
I never once felt bashful or self-conscious I was nude

I grew quite strong and quickly mastered all the possum ways
With each new skill I conquered came my possum-mother’s praise.
She nurtured me, and taught me what I needed to survive
Let’s face it- if it weren’t for her, I wouldn’t be alive

And then one day, I wandered where I knew I shouldn’t go
I heard the sound of music coming from a minstrel show
I edged a little closer, as the sound was quite divine
And that’s when I was spotted- -clinging to a yellow pine

A lady started yelling “There’s a child in the woods! ”
And though her words were gibberish, you bet I understood
My possum-mama called to me from deep within the trees
I hadn’t gotten far when I was plucked right off my knees

The strangers then surrounded me and passed me ‘round the group
They washed my filthy face and fed me homemade chicken soup
They threw me, crying, in a car jam-packed with funny junk
And as we pulled-away I heard a sickening “Ker-Thunk! ”

Tuesday, October 20, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: adoption,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this a few years ago and still make fixes to it as I see fit.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Brookes 23 October 2015

Enjoyed this poem and loved the rhyming scheme but the last stanza it a little clunky. If you take out home made second line. and add then to the third then they threw me in a jam packed car filled with noisy junk. It may scan better but its only a suggestion which I hope has not offended because its a great poem

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Brian Mayo 23 October 2015

no sincere suggestions will offend me. I think you're right that the last stanza may indeed be clunky- -and I hate messing up the last stanza most of all. however, every line in this poem has fourteen syllables- -but if the last stanza makes you stumble than I have not done my job. I will think about this, and make a few improvements if I can. Thanks for the honesty- -it's exactly what I need. I have no problem altering my poems to make them better, as long as the words are my own. Thank you, paul.

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Liza Sudina 20 October 2015

Perfect style! I adore regular poems! and appreciate your sense of humour and love remained for people! THANK YOU!

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Jette Blackstone 13 October 2017

Poor baby possum! I just want to pick him up and snuggle him,

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Bri Edwards 27 June 2017

this is going [just your name and the poem's link to poem's page] into July 2017's showcase, in my list of poems under July 2017's. Thanks, bri ;)

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Wayne Kingston 11 March 2016

Clearly drawn and just plain fun.

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Bri Edwards 05 February 2016

“And there she left me lay because I only weighed a pound” ……….i’ll grant you poetic license to type “left me lay”. I’m LOVING the story and the rhyming! it shall have to go to MyPoemList. I may even share it with friends. the following caused me to laugh out loud (a rare occurrence on PH) [unless I’m reading one o f MY own poems of course]: “And that’s when I was spotted- -clinging to a yellow pine” ……….i’d been wondering if ‘you’ had developed any prehensile capabilities. these lines (the last few words) brought a throaty groan from me. roadkill! ? beautiful in a tragic way. at least mamma won’t (yellow) pine for her kidnapped ‘son’. bri :) p.s. I only regret that I was not the one to write this. really NICE.

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Brian Mayo 05 February 2016

pine- -lol. good one. Truth is, I never should have been out during the day.

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Margaret O Driscoll 02 November 2015

Great imagination Brian, very different and refreshing read, unexpected end! ! !

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Brian Mayo 02 November 2015

Thank you for the kind words, Margaret.

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