Mohammad Muzzammil

Rookie - 389 Points (2nd July,1986 / Bahraich, India)

The Poet And The Sun ~ 1 - Poem by Mohammad Muzzammil

Far from us thou shining in the sky,
Thy golden rays wake up early in the morn,
And convince the birds hopeful singing fly,
Meadow is thy owed and too greenw wood,
Cause source art thou truely of their food.

To the whole universe is expended, O, thy empire,
Thy impact lies in the ocean and on the land,
And thy reflection is also there on the sand,
All are effected by thee, pray to be and aspire,
None is able seeing boldly thee face to face,
Who empowered thee? O splendour of blue surface!

O, who gave thee power in sky to shine?
The moon and stars are standing in single line,
To be inspired by thy powerful, golden rays,
Which lead them to their bright ways,
O, gold like sun! Tell us who gave thee might?
We wish to be thee being in dark night.

O, ever we would be shining on the earth like thee,
In our hands were there mounts, lands and sea,
The sky was in our favour and clay with us glee,
And our empire was stretched to where you can see,
But, what misdeed we commit or did anything loss?
For what the whole universe is with us cross.


Comments about The Poet And The Sun ~ 1 by Mohammad Muzzammil

  • (11/10/2011 7:16:00 AM)


    wow amazing Muzzammil, you keep surprising your fans. admire your word play, its such a blessing to be able to express one's heart so tastefully (Report) Reply

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  • (6/8/2011 5:37:00 AM)


    Nice line but sun's reply is awaited. The poet of east Iqbal wrote 'The poet and the moon'. You have done a good job sharing your thoughts with the sun. I liked it. Nice poem but still yeh dil mange more. A nice 10/10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 27, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, May 27, 2011


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