A Rainy Day Poem by Mohammad Muzzammil
A Rainy Day
On the summit the sun was shining,
And whosoever dared to get outside,
The sun burnt one and fainted by scorching,
And his impact stretched to the world wide,
From the sun, everyone was seeking leisure,
And wished to get in the cloudy pleasure.
In haste the wind came to the cloud,
And against the sun, they conspired,
And were keen to cow down his proud,
To all the vapours, the wind conspired,
Bewildered I turned my head up and ken,
The weather changed at all of sudden.
All the clouds made a ceiling before the blue surface,
And the puzzled sun went behind,
And till the dark night showed not his face,
Then the sky seemed really blind,
The lovely, lovely sweet wind blew,
And it began drizzling like dew.
With lightening and thunder it began to rain,
A moment passed, it became like a curtain,
And was alive every dead creature on the land,
Enjoyed all in the ocean and on the sand,
All of them thanked to their kind God,
And began singing hymn of their Lord.
Nice poems man. I especially love this one. Keep the good work up. Read Regret in still flow and tell me what U think.
Nice lines depicting the beauty of rain. If you replace 'culmination' (in the first line) with 'summit', it will be more expressive still I liked and gave it 10. Thanks for sharing.....
Mohammad I have just read 'A Rainy Day' one of your new poems... I am very delighted and very impressed at your style... (The wind and the rain forming a partnership of comfort) .... Some great thinking and surprising reading... I like it a lot... I will look forward to reading more of your work..... Thanks for asking me to read and reply to you........... Hope you enjoy a fun weekend........ Jim Troy
Omg what a great imagination.. I really felt that I'm already in that risk.. It's awesome +10 :)
THIS IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM. I LIKE THE POEM POEM.THE POEM DESERVES 100/100.
I love rainy days. This is wonderful the way you describe it...great poem!
I can hear the rain singing now and it beautiful voice come from this poem, i thought it came from the rain hahaha i mean this writing really has something cool inside, like the rain offers to the ground.. :) Keep it up my friend_Unwritten Soul
Rain lashing everywhere... al-muzzammil hain shabd yahan bheege palken laut ke aaye kahan kabhi to damaan me aaye ek nayi kashmakash yeh farmaan, yeh baarish ek aisi aaghaaz hai ye jabaaz boondo ki awaaz, yeh chamakti bijli yeh bheega chaman, yeh bheega aasmaan, paimane-dil aur dastaan-e-ruksaan....bas yehi to hai sab kuch, yeh lehre, yeh shabd, yeh shakhs, yeh aashiqana manzar jahaan wonderful..rain could not have been more beautiful with incriminating diseases and insects and muds and obstacles and water logging than your views together.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/5/2024 7:04:07 AM # 1.0.0.1119
nice lines.... In haste the wind came to the cloud, And against the sun, they conspired, And were keen to cow down his proud, To all the vapours, the wind conspired, Bewildered I turned my head up and ken, The weather changed at all of sudden. using conspired two times in the same stanza could have been dispensed with.... over all v good :) sat