A Rainy Day Poem by Mohammad Muzzammil

A Rainy Day

Rating: 4.3


On the summit the sun was shining,
And whosoever dared to get outside,
The sun burnt one and fainted by scorching,
And his impact stretched to the world wide,
From the sun, everyone was seeking leisure,
And wished to get in the cloudy pleasure.


In haste the wind came to the cloud,
And against the sun, they conspired,
And were keen to cow down his proud,
To all the vapours, the wind conspired,
Bewildered I turned my head up and ken,
The weather changed at all of sudden.


All the clouds made a ceiling before the blue surface,
And the puzzled sun went behind,
And till the dark night showed not his face,
Then the sky seemed really blind,
The lovely, lovely sweet wind blew,
And it began drizzling like dew.


With lightening and thunder it began to rain,
A moment passed, it became like a curtain,
And was alive every dead creature on the land,
Enjoyed all in the ocean and on the sand,
All of them thanked to their kind God,
And began singing hymn of their Lord.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raeanne Furfaro 12 August 2011

Great story. I felt like I was on a journey with you. I love the prose with which you describe the rain, sun and what it felt like. Very well done. Brava

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Romeo Della Valle 07 August 2011

Mother Nature manifesting itself in many forms and reflected in a thought provoking way through your well penned and poignant poem! Thanks for sharing and keep inspiring the World with your talented works! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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Spiritual Seeker 16 July 2011

A great poem Mohammad..with beautiful crafted words..a great insight to be able to write this.. a 10 Thnx for sharing.

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Spiritual Seeker 16 July 2011

A great poem Mohammad..with beautiful crafted words..a great insight to be able to write this.. a 10 Thnx for sharing.

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Eman Awad 10 July 2011

wow, that's one of the most enjoying poems i've read well done, keep it up

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Wahab Abdul 09 February 2012

THIS IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM. I LIKE THE POEM POEM.THE POEM DESERVES 100/100.

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Jacqui Broad 01 November 2011

I love rainy days. This is wonderful the way you describe it...great poem!

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Unwritten Soul 18 September 2011

I can hear the rain singing now and it beautiful voice come from this poem, i thought it came from the rain hahaha i mean this writing really has something cool inside, like the rain offers to the ground.. :) Keep it up my friend_Unwritten Soul

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The Devils Girl 07 September 2011

This is a really good read thanks for the invite :)

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Allemagne Roßmann 28 August 2011

Rain lashing everywhere... al-muzzammil hain shabd yahan bheege palken laut ke aaye kahan kabhi to damaan me aaye ek nayi kashmakash yeh farmaan, yeh baarish ek aisi aaghaaz hai ye jabaaz boondo ki awaaz, yeh chamakti bijli yeh bheega chaman, yeh bheega aasmaan, paimane-dil aur dastaan-e-ruksaan....bas yehi to hai sab kuch, yeh lehre, yeh shabd, yeh shakhs, yeh aashiqana manzar jahaan wonderful..rain could not have been more beautiful with incriminating diseases and insects and muds and obstacles and water logging than your views together.

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