poet Mohammad Muzzammil

Mohammad Muzzammil

A Rainy Day

On the summit the sun was shining,
And whosoever dared to get outside,
The sun burnt one and fainted by scorching,
And his impact stretched to the world wide,
From the sun, everyone was seeking leisure,
And wished to get in the cloudy pleasure.


In haste the wind came to the cloud,
And against the sun, they conspired,
And were keen to cow down his proud,
To all the vapours, the wind conspired,
Bewildered I turned my head up and ken,
The weather changed at all of sudden.


All the clouds made a ceiling before the blue surface,
And the puzzled sun went behind,
And till the dark night showed not his face,
Then the sky seemed really blind,
The lovely, lovely sweet wind blew,
And it began drizzling like dew.


With lightening and thunder it began to rain,
A moment passed, it became like a curtain,
And was alive every dead creature on the land,
Enjoyed all in the ocean and on the sand,
All of them thanked to their kind God,
And began singing hymn of their Lord.

Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 5, 2011
Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 13, 2011

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  • Wahab AbdulWahab Abdul (2/9/2012 10:43:00 PM)

    THIS IS A VERY BEAUTIFUL POEM. I LIKE THE POEM POEM.THE POEM DESERVES 100/100.

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  • Jacqui BroadJacqui Broad (11/1/2011 1:09:00 AM)

    I love rainy days. This is wonderful the way you describe it...great poem!

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (9/18/2011 12:04:00 AM)

    I can hear the rain singing now and it beautiful voice come from this poem, i thought it came from the rain hahaha i mean this writing really has something cool inside, like the rain offers to the ground.. :) Keep it up my friend_Unwritten Soul

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  • The Devils GirlThe Devils Girl (9/7/2011 4:19:00 PM)

    This is a really good read thanks for the invite :)

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  • Allemagne RoßmannAllemagne Roßmann (8/28/2011 7:20:00 AM)

    Rain lashing everywhere...
    al-muzzammil hain shabd yahan
    bheege palken laut ke aaye kahan
    kabhi to damaan me aaye ek nayi kashmakash
    yeh farmaan, yeh baarish ek aisi aaghaaz hai
    ye jabaaz boondo ki awaaz, yeh chamakti bijli
    yeh bheega chaman, yeh bheega aasmaan, paimane-dil
    aur dastaan-e-ruksaan....bas yehi to hai sab kuch,
    yeh lehre, yeh shabd, yeh shakhs, yeh aashiqana manzar jahaan

    wonderful..rain could not have been more beautiful with incriminating diseases and insects and muds and obstacles and water logging than your views together.

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  • Raeanne Furfaro (8/12/2011 3:51:00 AM)

    Great story. I felt like I was on a journey with you. I love the prose with which you describe the rain, sun and what it felt like. Very well done. Brava

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  • Romeo Della ValleRomeo Della Valle (8/7/2011 12:16:00 AM)

    Mother Nature manifesting itself in many forms and reflected in a thought provoking way through your well penned and poignant poem! Thanks for sharing and keep inspiring the World with your talented works! 10+++ Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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  • Spiritual Seeker (7/16/2011 6:39:00 PM)

    A great poem Mohammad..with beautiful crafted words..a great insight to be able to write this.. a 10 Thnx for sharing.

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  • Spiritual Seeker (7/16/2011 6:36:00 PM)

    A great poem Mohammad..with beautiful crafted words..a great insight to be able to write this.. a 10 Thnx for sharing.

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  • Eman Awad (7/10/2011 3:42:00 PM)

    wow, that's one of the most enjoying poems i've read
    well done, keep it up

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  • Abdallah GamalAbdallah Gamal (7/9/2011 2:58:00 PM)

    Omg what a great imagination.. I really felt that I'm already in that risk.. It's awesome +10 :)

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  • Jim Troy (7/9/2011 4:12:00 AM)

    Mohammad I have just read 'A Rainy Day' one of your new poems... I am very delighted and very impressed at your style... (The wind and the rain forming a partnership of comfort) .... Some great thinking and surprising reading... I like it a lot... I will look forward to reading more of your work..... Thanks for asking me to read and reply to you........... Hope you enjoy a fun weekend........ Jim Troy

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  • Mohammad Akmal Nazir (7/9/2011 1:31:00 AM)

    Nice lines depicting the beauty of rain. If you replace 'culmination' (in the first line) with 'summit', it will be more expressive still I liked and gave it 10. Thanks for sharing.....

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  • Kendzi Samuel (7/7/2011 7:24:00 PM)

    Nice poems man. I especially love this one. Keep the good work up. Read Regret in still flow and tell me what U think.

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  • Saadat TahirSaadat Tahir (7/7/2011 1:42:00 PM)

    nice lines....

    In haste the wind came to the cloud,
    And against the sun, they conspired,
    And were keen to cow down his proud,
    To all the vapours, the wind conspired,
    Bewildered I turned my head up and ken,
    The weather changed at all of sudden.

    using conspired two times in the same stanza could have been dispensed with....

    over all v good

    :) sat

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  • Malaya RosesMalaya Roses (7/7/2011 9:36:00 AM)

    This is a poem that remind me to the beauty of monsoon season.... especially for the farmers.... Effortlessly beautiful poem in wet season...! ! !
    Well done, my friend.

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  • Unwritten SoulUnwritten Soul (7/7/2011 6:21:00 AM)

    True true... i agree whatever you have said here...A rainy day can bud many ideas and you made yours in very bright one! ! _Unwritten Soul...

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  • Amartya Kalapahar (7/7/2011 3:39:00 AM)

    Nice words poet, I can see the picture of the wet season in front of me by reading your lines.

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  • Rekha Mandagere (7/6/2011 2:38:00 AM)

    This poem is beautiful than the rain itself. Great imaginative skills are exhibited. Nice poem. I give full 10 marks.

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  • Niamat Ali Murtazai (7/5/2011 8:24:00 AM)

    The poem describes the history of a rainy day. A beautiful phenomenon of nature has been beautifully presented

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