louis rams

Gold Star - 12,624 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

The Poets Pride 12/06/08 - Poem by louis rams

you have put pride in my heart and love in my soul
letting out emotions that i can't control
if my poems have inspired you to be the very best
then my poems have been put to the test.

for deep inside everyone-there is a voice that
wants to be heard.
just like the singing of a mocking bird.
this voice comes from deep within
and like the bird it wants to sing.

if people were to listen to the feelings locked up inside
they would not have anything to hide.
for through our words we are set free.
of all our worries and despairs
and wipes away all our cares.

even if it is for a short while, we become like the
bird flying high in the sky.
we leave the aches and pains on the ground below
and release all emotions that we know.

as we come back to the realities that we left behind
the burdens have dissappeared and a sense
of well being fills our hearts.
to give us a brand new start.

this is the poets pride-and i am happy to say
it has affected people in many a way.


Comments about The Poets Pride 12/06/08 by louis rams

  • Linda WinchellLinda Winchell (12/9/2008 9:52:00 AM)

    We are set free in some way through sharing our words with others in rhyme! A bird flying high, leaving aches and pains on the ground below, realities left behind! Bravo! ! ! Bravo! ! ! ! ! I could not have said it better myself Sir Louis! ! ! ! Ten!
    God's Blessings on you Sir Louis! ! ! May your heart continue to share. Linda
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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 8, 2008



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