Almost out to breathe the bold boys were
The men were gasping after chasing there
Ours is a vain attempts to fetch, said they all
To the groups who ordered, Catch the Naked girl.
The naked girl runs and runs too fast
She was clean, she was white, a bait of lust
She kept a swing, a strong storm for the time
To stir the stagnant men, the veiled sex as crime.
The deep discussions go on, the trances fade
Was it a female? A male? Not a eunuch's shade?
Whoever was but surely an eccentric or a mad one
To envy our repose on dark and false veil done.
Were you naked ever?
Were you not in public never?
Let us practice it
And heat the society a bit.
That settles it! ! ! i'm going to take all of my clothes off NOW. Then i'll run outside and down the middle of our town's main street, around the police station, the elementary school, AND the Catholic church before i head home to wait for the fallout! maybe i'll talk some of my old neighbors into joining me. bri :)
This is a very thought provoking poem powerfully presented. Values are going down. Morality should be implemented. Wonderful message you have transferred through this poem. This is very interesting poem brilliantly penned...10
Surely, it strikes at the very foundation of our male dominated society marred by hypocrisy. Social values have tumbled and humanity is at the receiving end. The poem is a bold and candid commentary calling for introspection. Thanks a lot for sharing.
An excellent poem with unique idea.....the power of nackedness is so high that it perhaps slaps the nacked society.....it is a time to think....and your poem prompts us to think and to rethink in order to reconstruct and redeem the NACKED SOCIETY....THANKS FOR SHARING.....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Nurul, p.s. to MyPoemList though a Poet's Notes would help me know the background of the poem. i hope you are well! bri :)