The Rich And The Poor Poem by Dave Alan Walker

The Rich And The Poor

Rating: 5.0


Strangled by the system
in a world of them and us
the rich
the poor
and them inbetween

It's only the rich
who know where they fit

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Corpolongo 12 November 2012

....and sorry to say, this is also true.....thank you for poetically saying it to all.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 12 November 2012

A cute poem spelling great truth.-Beautiful

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Stan Petrovich 11 November 2012

FINALLY, a poet who delved into the truly true. Bravo!

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Stan Petrovich 11 November 2012

At last a poet who has delved into the truly true. Bravo!

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Stan Petrovich 11 November 2012

At last you have delved nto the the truly true. Bravo!

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Heather Wilkins 22 July 2013

we are edging toward a two class society. the very rich and the very poor. not good. a point well taken.

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Makhosonke Dhlamini 24 December 2012

Well written you have punctuated your poem with the truth Lovely.

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Kevin Patrick 20 December 2012

Powerful, that last line really hits home the reality of this world, I think they know how to fit because they know how to take over the system the rich are smart, confident and driven to succeed at the expense of everything else, they covet the material so they seek the material. Writers generally see more gold in words then in things. this was truly gold. Short and sweet.

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Heather Wilson 16 December 2012

Well said, it takes all sorts, poor, those that feel rich and those that are.

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Guy Lip-more 08 December 2012

Short but to the point. Good write.

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