Tuesday, November 27, 2007

The River Comments

Rating: 5.0

I watch the river flowing down towards the deep blue sea,
At the end of its winding path I know you wait for me,
Like the mountains and the valleys and the sun up in the sky,
My love for you will shine eternally and never die.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Ana Zaldivar 02 February 2009

Wonderful andrew, this is an amazing poem. love it. Thanks for sharing. ana

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Ernestine Northover 02 April 2008

Now this is so good Andrew, a sentimental journey through some lovely imagery and natures wonders. Delightful to find. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Duncan Wyllie 22 March 2008

A stunning work Part 1 Andrew, this one seems to flow like a river in itself Wonderful Love duncan X

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Jeannie Ann Clark 25 December 2007

This is a beautiful poem... each poem you write, the reader feels like they are where you are....I will read Part II on another day! Thank you, Andrew (hey! that rhymes!)

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Thad Wilk 27 November 2007

Hey Andrew! I don't know but each poem you write gets better and better! This one especially is a winner! ! ! Great Write! *10 *! ! ! Thad

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