I watch the river flowing down towards the deep blue sea,
At the end of its winding path I know you wait for me,
Like the mountains and the valleys and the sun up in the sky,
My love for you will shine eternally and never die.
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Now this is so good Andrew, a sentimental journey through some lovely imagery and natures wonders. Delightful to find. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
A stunning work Part 1 Andrew, this one seems to flow like a river in itself Wonderful Love duncan X
This is a beautiful poem... each poem you write, the reader feels like they are where you are....I will read Part II on another day! Thank you, Andrew (hey! that rhymes!)
Hey Andrew! I don't know but each poem you write gets better and better! This one especially is a winner! ! ! Great Write! *10 *! ! ! Thad
Wonderful andrew, this is an amazing poem. love it. Thanks for sharing. ana