She sits on her bed in that cold dark room. the walls are painted with
regret and tears. they spell out her pain everytime she looks at them.
the cuts on her arms are proof that she has tried and failed. The blood
washes away when ice-like tears come crashing down. Her mind is
filled with agony and pain. She has mental dispise for herself because
she thinks shes faling. The floor is cold and stained with drops of blood
along with hate. she sits just staring at the cold empty room, theres a
chill in the air....shes not alone. She yells, 'What do you want! ? Go
away! Haven't you already done enough! ? , ' still more tears come and
hit the ground like bullets, 'Go away! ' she stands up but is knocked
back down. She screams, 'Let me go! ' out from the shadows comes
an ery voice the would send chills down your spine. 'Never my dear,
you are mine for the keeping.', she stands up as her heart bleeds from
pain, ' For your keeping? I came to you, and I can walk away! the walls
shake and the floor moves and knocks her down as if she were to
kneel. 'Your are going no where! ', ...........I don't think so! I have the
Lord as my savior now! now I will no longer have to suffer! You used
me and made me suffer to the almost point of death, you were killing
me! ! ! ! And you no longer have any power over me! ' She runs toward
the door, but feels a strong force pushing and pulling her back. She
calls out 'Lord release me from my demons and this hellish devil! ' she
is free and opens the door! she calapses into loving arms, and hears a
booming voice say, 'You did it my daughter. Now you can finally dry
your eyes, I am here, you are safe now. She looks back at the sun lit
room. the walls are clean and all mistakes have been forgivin, She
dries her tear stained face and looks down at her arms, the scars from
her arms and the blood have been washed away. And the thoughts of
all of the horible things in her past have been removed and it is then
that she realized that she is free and saved from what she was. She
smiles and says thank you Lord.
Errr is this a story? sorry didn't connect with me, maybe i'm reading it wrong? Or maybe its just not written in my style...
wow....im trying to think of one word that will some everything up, but i cant. i guess all i can say is wow. its awesome...its amazing....its....wow. thats all im going to say, is wow. excellent job. its awesome. its my favorite out of all of yours. its awesome. im def adding it to my favorites. awesome job Jess. fantastic.
wow. thats was deep. very good. i could almost picture it in my mind. thats crazy. keep writing :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
wow, amazing write. i love it.