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A Flower

Rating: 4.7

A flower, so beautiful.
yet so delicate to the touch.
As is my heart.
It doesnt ask for much.

Is he out there?
Is he looking for me?
My life, My love.
It all seems so blury to me.

I ask for support
from my friends.
Would they understand?
Would they comprehend?

I need answers.
I need to know.
Should I stay
or should I go?

Just to let ya'll know, this is an old poem its not how I feel now, lol. Hope you liked it anyway, lol. =)

Bonnie Collins 18 August 2008

Beautifully written with much perplexing decions in life as it can be at times. Your tender side is showing in this write.. Life can be complicated at times even when you are older....... Very short and sweet.... Bonnie

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Ency Bearis 18 August 2008

should i stay or should i go.... so let me know... beautiful flower i can't let you go... as you're sweet i cannot do... nice concept of the flower isn't it? Ency Bearis

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C T Heart 17 August 2008

nice flow of words...........loved your beautiful piece.

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Jess, you are lifes delicate beautiful flower, for eturnity! ! !

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Serenity Prayer 19 August 2008

i remember when you wrote this poem. i liked it then too. great poem. very short and simple yet its deep if you look into it.

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Chinedu Dike 09 January 2017

An insightful love ? poem, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing.

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Indira Renganathan 31 May 2009

A dilemma of a delicate flower well portrayed....nice write

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Catrina Heart 19 April 2009

beautiful piece, a significant write.......

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Mohammad Mahmoudi 13 March 2009

i loved it its written very nicly

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

A simple, soft and lovely love piece.10+.

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