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As The Sun Rises

Rating: 5.0

As the sun rises and I sit here all alone, I wish you were next to me So I could feel your warmth, your love. If you were here, there would be no more hesitations, I would look you in the eyes and tell you that you've got me so in love with you. As the sun rises, I sit here all alone, wanting your gentle touch. I look up at the sun and wonder if your watching too. The winds blow my hair to the side and a tear slides down my cheek. I've grown to love you that much is certain, I pray that you can return the favor, cause I can't get you out of my head. As the sun rises, my heart beats faster with every memory of you. As they flash through my head I smile and can't stop. Your not like the others, you care what I do, my dear, I've seem to have grown quite fond of you. As the sun sets the night winds pick up, and I suddenly wish I could feel your warmth once more, the feel of you next to me, the softness of your touch.

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~ Jon London ~ 29 June 2008

Jessica, your heart sings along every line..with this remarkable poem of love.....I got a great feeling from this piece....wonderful writer 10+ best wishes Jon.

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Kyle Shield Laster 25 June 2008

have u thought about writing songs? ? i think u'd make a great songwriter. i love this write.

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theres nothing as beautiful, as a girl in love.very nice i like it!

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Andre Lopez 16 June 2008

realy a rich poem! ! 10!

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Serenity Prayer 15 June 2008

I LOVE IT! ! ! 10 EXCELLENT ITS AWESOME! !

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