Wednesday, February 8, 2012

The Rose Comments

Rating: 4.0

Calm the night and stilled the sea
Bathed in its tranquility
A fleeting glimpse of death`s repose
Gently stirred the sleeping rose
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Valerie Dohren
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Dee Corpolongo 23 November 2013

Oh, so very beautiful....as a rose. This is the first time I read this, and I can see what I was missing. How beautifully you created this poem, it is almost magical. Thank you for sharing your blessing!

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Douglas Scotney 01 August 2013

Thanks Valerie. There is truth in it. Check my update, 'The Finest Rose'.

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Doug Bentley 13 April 2013

some roses wither. some roses bloom. only time will tell whether this rose's seed shall wither or bloom!

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Simon Gowen 02 May 2012

Beautifully written.

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Walterrean Salley 29 April 2012

Great subject. Good flow, I feel the melody.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 17 February 2012

Again, lovely.

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Vipins Puthooran 09 February 2012

excellent depiction/a good poem!

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Georgios Venetopoulos 08 February 2012

Classic! Tell me anything, I 'll accept it! You are the Rose! Thank you!

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Dave Walker 08 February 2012

A really wonderful poem. A great poem. May i invite you to read my new poem called, Time machine.

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Valerie Dohren

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