The Ruins Of My Dreamland Comments

Beautiful poem from Asif Andahib

very nicely expressed. I found the title to be very catchy

very poetic expression of situation of a broken heart

'tis a beautiful poem/ good expressions.... My hopes are seeping through my fingers like dry sands! ! ! ! ! !

Be glad your heart is no longer caged! Your heart is not broken, it is free, free to love again, Rain tears on the sands of hope! Wet on dry will almost solidify, then shape your hope! . you can be more in control of it after you have cried some! You are heavier that Earth? This to me means you have very attractive gravity for love! Do sail on your sea of tears, but insure the island you find is lush and inhabited, if not sail on! Wait for the skies of sorrow to clear, or put on some rose tinted flying goggles and navigate your way to a love where the weather is fine most of the year! Your poem is so sad! It is how you feel? If so I hope you don't mind me trying to lift your spirits with my well meant ramblings x