The Sea Pebbles Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

The Sea Pebbles

Rating: 5.0


Wet scattered pebbles
Adorned the whitest white shore
Jewels of the sea.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Saturday, September 5, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry 14 September 2020

An Eternal Tide Beach Memory In My Mind scattered pebbles white foam wave washed still tide surge sweep in upon sandy shore upon an eternal tide beach memory in my mind Inspired by the poem 'The Sea Pebbles' by the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin. Dedicated to the poet Rose Marie Juan Austin.

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Terry Craddock 12 September 2020

scattered pebbles white foam wave washed, still tide surge sweep in upon sandy shore, upon an eternal tide beach memory in my mind

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Anjandev Roy 07 September 2020

Great short work.........thank u, dear poetess.....anjandev roy.

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Dr Antony Theodore 07 September 2020

scattered pebbles the jewels. fine picture.. tony

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Bri Edwards 06 September 2020

for " short and sweet" , this is a very nice poem. i prefer a poem with a little more 'meat' on the 'bones', but..........i'm kinda busy and limited on PC these days, so....i give you a few extra points for brevity. to MyPoemList bri :)

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Rob Lamberton 09 August 2025

The same pebbles may go unnoticed if not for the wetness that enhances and captures the eyes!

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Timber Koleden 21 June 2025

A lovely Haiku! Thank you for sharing!

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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2023

So much beauty beyond what we see if we just stop to think a little more deeply! .. Such a truly awesome poem! ..

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Rebecca Navarre 15 January 2023

Beautifully crafted with such beautiful heart and imagery! .. Definite Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++

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Anjandev Roy 18 February 2021

Simply wonderful.....thank u, dear poetess..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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