The Sinking Of A (Friend) Ship Poem by Susan Lacovara

The Sinking Of A (Friend) Ship

Rating: 5.0


The hurl of hurt
Blinding sandbox dirt
Shoveled from cynics
Those which mimic
With envy green
Truths unseen
A window closed
By invented prose
The door is slammed
With a careless hand
Guided and scribed
A jealous intent
clicked and carried
Maliciously 'SENT'
A playground of fools
Bending the rules
Unaware how the tools
Of belittling and blasting
Damaging and lasting
Are for naught
Without pure thought
A cowardly act of breathing lies
Dissolving ties
A compromise of kindness
A blindness
An unrecognized danger
That creates and crafts a stranger
Where once a kinship thrived
A dagger thrust deep
The bloodstains to keep
As the souvenir
Of posting words cruel and cavalier
Walk away, although wounded
From the slice
The stab
The needless senseless gab
Riddled with holes in the soul
Still knowing your story
(albeit falsely told)
Was merely conceived
To make another believe
Their days are far richer than yours.





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Thursday, January 19, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: carelessness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(01/18/17) Penned upon hearing a friend's recount of just how cruel people can be, while hiding behind the shield of the internet...Where faces and true fact, are disguised and diluted on FACEBOOK. Injury comes with a price too highly paid. I stand by my friend, D.C., remaining a heartbeat, not a 'click' away. PEACE, and remember...BE KIND and PLAY FAIR....really not so hard to do!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Corpolongo 19 January 2017

This is written with such descriptive and deep feelings like only you can write, my friend. Thank you for your friendship, and for your understanding of the pain that one has inflicted upon me, with such lies. I am surely blessed to have such a good friend as you by my side. {{{hugs}}} and thanks for the poem....♥

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* Sunprincess * 19 January 2017

......a fabulous write, so many people on the internet have split personalities, funny how they can post hate-filled comments on some poems attacking both the poem and poet... and others give them a very nice comment....and other people pretend to be a friend and message.....then all of a sudden stop, with no explanation...and no response to messages...I don't have facebook, but I can imagine the people are the same on every site...I'm pleased you're standing by your friend, this is beautiful ★

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