It is as if white clouds have come to earth.
The sky is falling. Do you mind, my friend?
Moon sheets echo a shining out of time.
Tree limbs cripple the cadence of snow's song.
Eyes tell me that you pity the cold glass.
You write a letter to me in its frost.
Your words weave me a coat of chimney smoke.
That shadow is the warmth I hold most dear.
Previously published: Voices Israel
we are free falling to disaster..............that's for sure.....human were the Satans...
You show your reader not only the scene in front of your eyes, but that which is hidden in your heart. Your poetry is music to the eye and a canvass that depicts your soul. Superb. love, Allie xxxx
yet another one i caught myself reading for the fifth time over, so wonderful.... ben
I love to see the world through your eyes! It's a beautiful place. Thanks for sharing.
The sky is falling. Do you mind, my friend? Moon sheets echo a shining out of time. Tree limbs cripple the cadence of snow's song....scintillating expression dear Sandra! It's a fascinating poem.
Thanks for your most recent 'poetic comment'. As regards above poem 'I don't mind at all! ' It is a real positive joy to read and a true work of art.
You’ve brought down sky into the ‘palms of my heart’…and feel…romance and so on endlessly… Great job for me Poet. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK
The Sky may be falling but you are soaring Sandra - you weave such beauty and never fail to draw me in to read again and again -
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ammmmazing composition indeed! falling reality detected to the point..........10