Tuesday, October 6, 2009

The Soft September Sunlight Shone Comments

Rating: 5.0

The soft September sunlight shone
Through still and stagnant waters green,
A clouded mass of silt and weed
Beside the bridge's arch.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Yelena M. 03 June 2010

'Too shy to leave the safety Of the shadows where it swam...' You have a unique style blending nature and emotions. I could immediately see that soft light. With best wishes, Yelena.

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Ernestine Northover 18 October 2009

Your pen is your paintbrush Andrew and your words the colours to tell the story. This is another of your superb writes, the letters illuminate the pages. Loved it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Sandra Fowler 18 October 2009

A beautiful title and the contents of your poem does not disappoint. May this day be a solace to you when snowflakes, like autumn leaves, start to fall.10/10. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 16 October 2009

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh The beautiful alliteration of the title is a perfect prelude for this autumnal string quartet. Your masterful command of the English language produces glorious images that take this springtime Aussie into the heart of an English October woodland. Beautiful poem. Beautifully written. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

Brilliant piece. loved it. -

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Duncan Wyllie 10 October 2009

As if each word were a colour and each phrase a canvass, , you have a wonderful way Andrew Take care Love duncan

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Ramesh T A 06 October 2009

Wonderful description of September scene of Nature! Nice to read!

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Another picturesque poem Andrew and I loved it from beginning to end, and the last stanza I enjoyed the most. You never fail to amaze me with the beauty you see in everything. 10 love Karin

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Lynda Robson 06 October 2009

A lovely descriptive write Andy, mellow like the season, with a tongue-twister of a title, well versed my friend, 10 Lynda xx

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Ian Bowen 06 October 2009

Andrew, solid piece of work. Loved every second I read this.10/10 Regards, Ian

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