Lines Of Success Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Lines Of Success

Rating: 4.6


Essence holds its dream entire,
Strengthens hope true into fire
To fit in it to be higher
To the most breezed to aspire.

Its strength with a wind-lot by,
Sprouts ambition to the sky
To bloom into a smile high.
Happiness across to fly,

Its fluttering wings in flight
Spreads across the field its light.
Blossomed is success glass-bright
With glory mounting in sight.

Heart content is in sublime,
Remains diamond-worth in prime.
Victory does reign in clime,
Hailing joy bell-like to chime.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 28 February 2010

I like it a lot..I am sharing with my friends on facebook.

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Jennifer Wilson 19 October 2009

WOW! It was a treat to read your poem. I really enjoyed it! 10 definately!

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Aubrey silver 21 October 2009

i loved the rhyme schem it was wonderful you are indeed vary talented

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Omar Ibrahim 16 October 2009

increadibly stunnig! ! ! ! wonderful rhymes! ! ! keep writing and tell me once you write anything! ! ! 10++++++++++++

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Nikunj Sharma 16 October 2009

musical and mystical..........treat for eyes and heart........good poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 March 2019

Essence of dream holds message of success. This poem is very brilliantly penned. This is an excellent sharing done here...10

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Abhishek Dabgotra 17 May 2018

Nice poem

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Momin taiba 27 November 2017

Awsm poem....😚😚I loved it

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Beautiful poem.....very beautiful rhythm...

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Kieran J96 11 May 2010

this is agreat poem that expresses the hopes and dreams of many. as previously said you have a gre4at rhyming scheme. great poem

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