The Star Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

The Star

Rating: 5.0


The city lights are shining.
And though I'm far away,
It won't be too much longer
Till I'm in their array.

I've paid my dues to join them.
And now I have a place
Reserved among the starlets
Who yearn to see my face.

I've dreamed of this forever,
Enduring sleepless nights.
And wished the stars of Heaven,
Would all be guiding lights.

If I had come in daytime,
The sun might block their view.
That's why I come in nighttime,
So they might see me too.

I surely love the nighttime.
The dark I've never feared.
You should have heard the shouting
The night I first appeared.

Yes, I see them clearly now,
They're looking out to see.
I'm the one they're waiting for.
I guess they've heard of me.

Well, now I'm here before them.
They kneel before my face.
The time has come to judge them,
This sinful human race.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Ouch. that ending is steamy.. great write as expected, from a great poet.

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Emancipation Planz 09 March 2009

Yes.... the stanzas twinkle.... how are the red carpet additions doing? aroha xx

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Awesome. An interesting read. Has character, ending was brilliant! D

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Cristy Upshaw 09 June 2009

this didn't end the way I imagined, but turned out just as wonderful. you have a great talent.

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Stars are always fascinating-especially shooting stars.I'd give you a ten with a tail of stars if i could vote.Lovely poem.

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Laurie Hill 21 March 2009

Excellent, just excellent 10

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Meggie Gultiano 14 March 2009

oh, i thought it was the other way, but never mind, ..A lovely piece, and another pleasure to read. I am in awe of you always. hugs, Meggie

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