The sun melts the snow
revealing the barren earth
left with no trace of life;
I cry for my broken heart
that has no more blood to shed
On a very serious note the outcry of a sensible heart, enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing this wonderful Tanka.
A lost love 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
Pain and sadness of a broken heart find beautiful expression in this poem.
καθώς ο γιος λιώνει το χιόνι περιμένω άλλη μια μέρα κολύμβησης και ψάρεμα στη λίμνη
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The sun melts the snow revealing the barren earth left with no trace of life; I cry for my broken heart that has no more blood to shed - - - - - - - -A powerful write that reveals your broken heart - - - when you say - - -no trace of life, no more blood to shed.Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.
Thank you for your beautiful remark