The Talking Trees Poem by Daniel Brick

The Talking Trees

Rating: 4.5


Every tree in the countryside spoke to me, saying,
HOLY! HOLY! In the forest, enchantment...
Who can express all of it?
Ludwig van Beethoven,1815

The trees will not speak to me.
Their branches bend toward the earth.
They are heavy with water, from three days
of rain. Water drops fall from their leaves
to the already saturated grasses. Perhaps
trees and grasses stretch toward each other
to form a wet green union, a blending
of their identities as growing things
that do not move from place to place,
but exult in their stationary perfection.

In the dappled morning light, I loiter
between two maple trees, wondering
which one will take notice of me, and
answer my greeting with its own kind of
salutation. The sun rises higher in the sky.
No answering gesture happens. But a breeze
grazes my face and no doubt receives some
answering gesture from the leaves of both
maples. I am a witness to this exchange,
my hope is to be a participant in it.

Do the trees have any sense of effort?
Do they feel the movement of sap
through all their branches and leaves
as a worthy effort that makes them
swell with success? Or are they
simply living things in which a process
perpetually occurs, with no sense of time,
no awareness of what must be. Their existence
contains no thought, no strain: in idleness
they achieve everything in perfect sync.

If the trees could read my mind,
if they could register my feelings
for them, they would acknowledge me
in some vegetative way, some offering
of their being, maybe a cluster of leaves
falling in my path, maybe a silent gesture
of branches conveyed as the wind swept
through the tree on its mission elsewhere.
Or perhaps the tree's soul would speak
directly to my soul, meaning HOLY! HOLY!

Monday, June 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: communication,trees
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 23 August 2022

The poet's hope is just a participant in the phenomenon. A great poem.. fabulous imagery. Appreciated the theme and the plot where the poet is just a spectator.

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Susan Williams 15 June 2017

Daniel! ! ! I can always come and refresh myself at the well of your imagination and talent. Today, you took me on a walk in the woods with you and we talked about the nature of being and the unity that may exist between trees and me and thee. And really, Daniel, if we listened closer to the creation would we hear the history of ages building ring by ring in their trunks? Your poem gave me quite a lift today. Thank you. 10 million stars over this piece! !

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Daniel Brick 16 June 2017

I'm glad for the lift this poem gave you, Susan! It lifted me writing it. I don't think there is ever an end-point to gratitude, and the trees are such wonderful companions in our lives. The Twin Cities has parks with trees providing shade and companionship but everywhere there are groves of trees, solitary trees, trees lining boulevards, etc. AND now I learn they communicate with each other and us. I told this to a friend, and he said firmly, Well, of course, this has always been true. Amen to that.

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Nosheen Irfan 15 June 2017

Nature can be responsive at times but it can also be totally indifferent. Humans specially poets, artists and thinkers have always tried to communicate with nature for inspiration n growth. Nature gets us into a contemplative mood. Observing its subtle mood shifts or its obvious changes can teach us a lot about life. How the poet seeks a communication with trees is man's quest for peace n light. When the material world doesn't give us answers, we retreat to nature. And it's very consoling. A casual stroll among trees may lead to soul's awakening. A beautiful work. A 10.

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Daniel Brick 30 June 2017

A CASUAL STROLL AMONG TREES MAY LEAD TO THE SOUL'S AWAKENING - that 's the essence of the poem, Nosheen. Wonderfully exoressed!

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Liza Sudina 12 June 2017

Today people will plant 25 maple trees in one of the streets here - celebrating so the holiday - the Day of Russia! So 25 more trees will grow and bring joy to people and would speak directly to our souls, meaning HOLY! HOLY!

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