saadat tahir

Gold Star - 5,193 Points (21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

The…timeless Surf...0605-2010 - Poem by saadat tahir

I wish my flowing tears; stood witness,
to a crashing loneliness, in this cess.
O'had we not made a forsaken start,
and none had bet for a broken heart.
Hopes, heart, dashed to bits on distant isles,
to impassable barriers of a million miles.
The armada's hopeless tryst with far-off rifts,
stands alone, cluthing, fistful sands, as it drifts.
Lost to anguish, hurting wistful desires,
ambers doused afore the raging fires.
I wish those memories; would just wash,
spare me the pain and enduring splosh.
Heaven intercede, to completely erase,
the mindless waves, sadness and craze.

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Comments about The…timeless Surf...0605-2010 by saadat tahir

  • Yasmin Khan (5/2/2013 2:20:00 PM)


    It's highly nostalgic verse, serene and somber.We wish memories to wash away but they never. They flicker for ever but never pass away. a beautiful write with apt symbolism. (Report) Reply

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  • Meena Mustafa (6/30/2012 4:22:00 PM)


    Another beautiful poem. So full of depth. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 9, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 30, 2012


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