The Two Worlds Of Man Poem by Tan Pratonix

The Two Worlds Of Man

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When I was a child
my eyes were filled
with a pure light
and I gazed with awe
at the beauty
and innocence
of the world, which
only a child can see.

But as I grew older
the dust and dirt
of humanity
dimmed my vision,
and I saw a world
grim and cruel
and terrifying,
rolling towards
an abyss
at the end of its
polluted path.

The Two Worlds Of Man
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Nichols 17 November 2016

Light to dark. Beautiful comparisons.

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Curtis Johnson 14 September 2015

I like the contrast of the light and purity of childhood with the 'in your face' confrontation with the reality of adulthood. Blending the two realities together can be a great source of comfort and hope, because the world is always filled with both realities. The light and purity we find in childhood is not a 'give' in adulthood. It must be sought after and fought for. Through a personal relationship with Christ, I have found joy, assurance, and hope. Blessings. Curtis.

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William Jackson 02 January 2008

Quite true! If only I could see the world through the eyes of a child again. But innocence and the world of innocence is lost.

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John Libertus 13 April 2006

They're both true, Tan: the world is bigger than you often think, and bigger than you ever think. But this teen-age view says one or the other.

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