shiza khan

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- The Ultimate Desire - - Poem by shiza khan

the intense eyes reveal the hidden appetite,
the lips so seductive to have a bit of pie,
with the passion u see thru me makes me go wild
the luks so killing even the serial of killers wud die,
the touch so sensational tht send shivers to my body,
the way u say u love me is so breath taking tht cud
take my life but even thn i won't complain,
All this i need baby.......Go On n say u love me
n i say to the world tht i belong to u and u belong to me.

Comments about - The Ultimate Desire - by shiza khan

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/6/2008 2:41:00 PM)

    Love is the ultimate desire, nothing old, rather universal appeal. Enjoyed this composition. (Report) Reply

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  • Ershad Mazumder (9/2/2008 11:08:00 PM)

    Siza dear, very old theme and thought.for thousand years lovers are saying this.give a new definition to love.but still i like it. (Report) Reply

  • (8/30/2008 2:24:00 PM)

    This certainly was a seductive piece. I'm not sure that it was as complete
    and total an expression as I have read in other places but it was very good.
    Well worth a recommendation.

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/5/2008 2:37:00 PM)

    ...words are here emitting truth....
    a 10 has been clicked
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  • (4/10/2008 6:02:00 AM)

    so much love in between the lines...
    reads good. congrats, shiza
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 27, 2008

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