The Unforgettable Circumstance! Poem by Navod Jayasuriya

The Unforgettable Circumstance!

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Consternation I had,
was giant and massive,
was a matter to dismay,
and a matter to confound,
as was much perplexed,
in a way addle,
causing a severe pain,
that is too much unceremonious.
It ran through,
just like a horrendous wind,
it blew apace,
unsaliently and impenetrably.
problems are raspy wounds,
which are never healed.

Could not ponder and contemplate,
even to circumspect,
effete composure of me,
made me much more burble,
and a lot more uncertain.
it blew like a boisterous gale.
whole world is a state of mess!

Even the time,
betrayed me,
kept standing,
against me,
with an abortive,
unavailing success.
whole world is a state of mess!

Perceived the art,
descried the pattern,
of your groovy style,
was hilarious.
Love is pure and genuine!

Evermore doodled,
at classes,
at home,
everywhere I went,
visualizing the figure of love,
with a great exultation,
and an exhilarating pleasure.
Love is true and pure!

Every time I saw you,
was lot much captivated,
owing to the fascinating beauty,
owing to the glamorous style,
I was fully enchanted,
as a bee to Laelia.
But gasped with a fear,
that I would loose you in company,
and would not get any chance afterward,
to see you and being enchanted again.
Love is marvelous and wonderful!

My own world was dolorous,
brimful of doldrums,
and you made it,
a world of heaven,
consists of anticipations,
which we all,
adore to have.
Love is genuine and pure!

The commitment I made,
was tremendous and immense,
never slacked,
never slacks,
never will.
Love is true and pure!

Sufficient consequences garnered,
due to the skillful talent,
of being consummated,
in the field of love.
Love is glamorous and unfeigned!

Seeing you every time,
made me stupefy,
because of the enormous beauty,
which you have,
can rock the art,
Love is wonderful and genuine!

Your eyes are glittering blue diamonds,
your voice is mild and mellifluous,
your glide in serein is supreme,
your hair is a cascade,
of bistre colour,
and it starts flowing down,
over the rocks,
over the valleys,
fabricating an alluring picture.
your beauty is fine and everlasting!

Incrementally got separated,
still ask why?
but the reply,
is not served.

She lived in ease,
there was none to praise,
but there were many to gaze,
and there was only I,
who gave her a reverence,
staying behind.
My love is unfeigned and true!

Saturday, August 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamunur Rahman Kayes 04 December 2019

who gave her a reverence, staying behind. My love is unfeigned and true!

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Stephen Magill 22 November 2016

wow..the first 4 stanzas make such a great poem. you have sooo much feeling and.....vision inside your eyes, connected to the thesaurus on your tongue. This could easily be 3 or 4 poems. I really like your style. wow 17? cant wait to read your stuff after your heart has been lifted high and then trampled on and lifted high once again.

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Navod Dilhara 18 November 2019

Thank you for the admiration!

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Palitha Ranatunge 19 February 2016

Very well written and some words are still missing from my vocabualary. It's about love, isn't it? The love is a mere fabricated icing that a lover decorating on an ugly looking brown piece of baked loaf. You may not agree with me. Any way thank you Steve. You are very good and the poetic language of your's is at a very high level. It is a record that each poem of you rated with best ratings. Thank you for sharing your marvellously written poetry with us.

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Navod Dilhara 24 February 2016

Thank you palitha, for your perception. It's alright that you pointed out your opinion, , well, thank you for the comment.

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