The Uninvited Guest ~ Part 1 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

The Uninvited Guest ~ Part 1

Rating: 5.0


Don't know how and when,
He entered my heart,
The uninvited guest!
I kept it closed, every time,
Never allowed anyone to try
Closely guarded my dreams
Like a pearl in the shell
How did that happened?
From where he arrived
That uninvited guest!

They all cautioned me
About the lustful mouth
And the intimidating eyes
Howling like a vulture
Who pierced it through?

I must say, the Sun, The Moon
The nature, the birds, the flowers
All I have been seeing for years,
but when he entered
everything started to look
so different, never thought
that the tangerine sun
shines bright and brings freshness
never saw two moons,
And so many stars shining together.

The meaning of my life changed
The song of birds,
The blooming of flowers
The fluttering butterfly
The passing air through bamboo leaves
Enchanted my soul
As it seems to exist now.

Sunday, June 27, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: journey,lessons of life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 28 June 2021

Perfection!

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The uninvited guest has charmed us with song of the birds, blooming of the flowers and fluttering of the butterflies.

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Dear Asim ji, i love it when you combine nature with philosophy and give it special flavour. Top stars

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 28 June 2021

Wonderfully penned that it touched my heart Bravo!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 June 2021

by rediscovering your own consciousness, you enjoy the same things a little differently 5 Stars Full on Top for this philosophy

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Deepak S S 01 July 2021

Very creative thinking. I enjoyed your theme.

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Zumas Millamo 30 June 2021

Circus is about to begin.

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Poetic Sky 30 June 2021

Master class poem, I liked the way you described the love and its trap.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 June 2021

Beautiful images and nice flow that tingle the mind and flutter the heart. To my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 30 June 2021

The title alone and the opening stanza grips like cobra forces a reader to finish this wonderful story

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