Often I feel
The unprivileged
Is the most privileged.
When I see them in unkept worn
Roaming like a free bird
As the coo of mind spoke
Often I feel
The unprivileged
Is the most privileged.
Sitting on the gravel gray
Fighting like a mad ray
Totally unaware what others say
Often I feel
The unprivileged
Is the most privileged.
And those dawn and dusk play
With no concern to ever study
Just a days work enough to enjoy
Often I feel
The unprivileged
Is the most privileged.
Lingering here and there
And no one bothered to care
Just morning bread and night shelter
Often I feel
The unprivileged
Is the most privileged.
The other end of river
Always seems better
But the truth is sharper
Nothing comes without author.
You are the author
Laying all background cover
Until all seems brighter.
Sitting on the gravel gray/Fighting like a mad ray/Totally unaware what others say/Often I feel The unprivileged/Is the most privileged......scintillating poetic expression! A thought provoking write........10/10
Roaming like a free bird! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Yes, that's true! I appreciate the spirit of this thoughtful work!
Often the poor possess an inner joy that is not dependent on material things, and sometimes the rich are miserable, no matter how much they have. Happiness is a way of traveling, as your wonderful poem illustrates.
What a wonderful concept and poem, Varshs Panagiota Romios xx
beautiful, , lovely portraying the helplessness.. clear 10 Feel not unprivileged Wednesday,15th July 2020 everybody is privileged and favored with little more or less afforded one feels secure in an environment to present the case at present Hasmukh Mehta
So lovely and beautiful.. well verses.. real 10 Somewhere life remains kind and finds Some alternative for the downtrodden And makes them feel heaven here Hasmukh Mehta
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The unprivileged Is the most privileged.....sometimes... Yeah the truth is sharper Nothing comes without author.....wonderfully expressed
Thank-you for understanding the expressions. Yeah sometimes these previledges are awesome.