The Vicar Is Quicker Poem by JoAnn McGrath

The Vicar Is Quicker

Rating: 5.0


If you want to go to heaven
But your sins are all to blame
You may repent times seven

but still you may live in shame
Your faults may lie in waiting
and you might resort to liquor

Don't give in, just go to a friend
Dodgy Dave the Vicar is quicker

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cecil (cj) Krieger 10 April 2007

Hey Jojo I had to read this 6 times! Wait a sec..................................................................................................... make that 7! Loved it!

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Lisa Wilkinson 10 April 2007

Hey Jojo this is fab, Im just getting to know David, he told me about your poem so well done, full marks, cheered me up no end, thanks.

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Dee Daffodil 10 April 2007

LOL...Nicely done! ! Wonderful tribute to our friend...Dodgey Dave the Vicar! ! Hugs, Dee

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Pam Thomas 09 April 2007

It is a wonderful tribute to a very wonderful man, My sweet friend across the sea. Loved it. Pam

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Melvina Germain 09 April 2007

This is a fabulous poem, a lovely tribute to an awesome guy.--Melvina--

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Ben Gieske 07 November 2007

I like your sense of humor.

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Daniel Murphy 04 May 2007

such skill you have!

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Alison Cassidy 15 April 2007

I thought this was a clever piece until I read the other comments - and learned the source of your inspiration - Now it's even funnier! You pen comedy well. love, Allie xxxx

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Daniel Partlow 12 April 2007

Your poetry reveals a light and happy ticker. Let it give many pause to think and enjoy a brief snicker :)

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Original Unknown Girl 11 April 2007

LOL! ! I don't know if 7 times would be enough for me..... HG: -) xx

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