If you want to go to heaven
But your sins are all to blame
You may repent times seven
but still you may live in shame
Your faults may lie in waiting
and you might resort to liquor
Don't give in, just go to a friend
Dodgy Dave the Vicar is quicker
Hey Jojo this is fab, Im just getting to know David, he told me about your poem so well done, full marks, cheered me up no end, thanks.
LOL...Nicely done! ! Wonderful tribute to our friend...Dodgey Dave the Vicar! ! Hugs, Dee
It is a wonderful tribute to a very wonderful man, My sweet friend across the sea. Loved it. Pam
This is a fabulous poem, a lovely tribute to an awesome guy.--Melvina--
I thought this was a clever piece until I read the other comments - and learned the source of your inspiration - Now it's even funnier! You pen comedy well. love, Allie xxxx
Your poetry reveals a light and happy ticker. Let it give many pause to think and enjoy a brief snicker :)
LOL! ! I don't know if 7 times would be enough for me..... HG: -) xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hey Jojo I had to read this 6 times! Wait a sec..................................................................................................... make that 7! Loved it!