Friday, August 1, 2008

The Warmth Of Summer's Sun Comments

Rating: 5.0

I feel the warmth of summer's sun
As now the day has just begun
The little children having fun
Within the month of May.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Wendy Bureau 12 August 2008

I loved the rhyming in this piece.. The vivid way each line told a story.. painted a picture.. Pure poetry Poet.. Well done, ~Wendy~

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Duncan Wyllie 04 August 2008

Don't tell me how you do this Andrew, it may spoil it, only know that it's brilliant Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 02 August 2008

This poem, The Warmth of Summers Sun, amazes me if i may say The imagery is eloquent, a gem of a write i have found here - Must be my lucky day! ! *10*! ! Best wishes Andrew! ! Friend Thad

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