The Warmth Of Summer's Sun Poem by ANDREW BLAKEMORE

The Warmth Of Summer's Sun

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I feel the warmth of summer's sun
As now the day has just begun
The little children having fun
Within the month of May.
While flowers all around me grow
The blossom on the breeze does blow
As butterflies and bees do go
Upon their busy way.
Amidst the trees the birds do sing
Then fly with grace upon the wing
The merry cheer that they do bring
With songs so sweet and gay.
Beneath the hills a silver stream
Meanders like a pleasant dream
I see the water brightly gleam
As diamonds dance and play.
The sky above of deepest blue
Does make the scene a perfect view
If I should wait the whole year through
I'd see no better day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wendy Bureau 12 August 2008

I loved the rhyming in this piece.. The vivid way each line told a story.. painted a picture.. Pure poetry Poet.. Well done, ~Wendy~

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Duncan Wyllie 04 August 2008

Don't tell me how you do this Andrew, it may spoil it, only know that it's brilliant Love duncan X

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Thad Wilk 02 August 2008

This poem, The Warmth of Summers Sun, amazes me if i may say The imagery is eloquent, a gem of a write i have found here - Must be my lucky day! ! *10*! ! Best wishes Andrew! ! Friend Thad

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