Monique Morua

Rookie (11-04-95 / Riverside California)

The Wise Moon - Poem by Monique Morua

It probably looks down on us in disgust
Looking at everything we do; Both the good and bad things
The bad severly overweighing the good
It's been looking sad lately
Like it's trying to tell us something
Something that is for our bennefit;
But we wont listen
It's definitly blue
It knows that if we continue like this
We'll end up screwing outrselves over
And we'll blame it on everyone but ourselves
We'll maybe even blame it on the Moon
But the Moon knew the whole time


Comments about The Wise Moon by Monique Morua

  • (8/5/2010 5:11:00 PM)


    Interesting thought. You are right on what we are doing to ourelves. (Report) Reply

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  • (8/5/2010 5:08:00 PM)


    Great expressions. I like your use of metaphor in this poem. Easy to understand. Goodjob (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 5, 2010



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