The women of death
Loom over the heartbroken
Weighing down upon them
Speaking the only words they know
'Why didn't you? '
'What if? '
For hearing these words can kill us
Even more than the loss
Emma this poem gave me goosebumps, so well written, and so very true, Keep up the good word, your friend Julieanne
This to me is the most interesting work you have. I love the concept of 'the women of death'. But I want more. Is it ok to ask for that? Expand on the concept and make this piece longer.
I liked the psychological overtones; dealing with the women of death is one of lessons of life, or being condemned to perpetual guilt.
Wow...another great poem with a meaning I can somehow understand in a way, without fully experiencing what it's about! A sign of a good poem :)
Sounds like the name of The Woman of Death is....... Guilt.
A wonderful poem! ! ! Although Emma is still defining her own style in writing poems, she shared with us in this one, one of the most intriguing questions of the human being: 'Why can't we change terrible happenings in our lives? ''How could we find out other ways to end an unpredictable situation? 'My advice is: 'Let the life in itself answer this question for us! ! '
dear Emma I don't know a thing about you.butI I am hanging on your depths..believe me Emma, you dive deep in this poem...bringing forth the the key that opens my mind and leave me with an untamable desire to read more. 10 pointer from holland
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very Good write and I have frelt the broken heart of the second line. Keep up the good work. Your friend Lynn